You might have noticed that my blog address is Ophelia Redstar. It may seem odd because it doesn't have anything to do with my blog. But, it isn't any further from the truth. Ophelia is my literary alter ego.When I day dream about non-reality, make believe land, she is me. She is also a vampire that is also a vampire assasin. She is the part of the me that is strong, out spoken and has a backbone.
I had planned on participating on the "Write a Novel in a Month" that was going on in November and realized, it wasn't going to happen. But, I had decided that I was going to write about her story anyway. I wanted to write Sarah in at least one story line. I plan on writing my son in, too. But, anyway, this was what I wrote.
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The night was one that Ophelia would never forget. It was a
haunting evening, All Saint’s Day. Day of the Dead. And, she had ended up in
Mexico. She had been following the trail of a vampire by the name of Phaedra
that had a deviant taste for children. She used the excuse that the blood of
children helped to keep her youthful appearance. All she could figure was that
Phaedra forgot the source of the blood had no effect on your appearance. It did
however have an effect on your mind and strength. And, consuming the blood of
children tended to make creatures unstable. Impatience and short tempers being
the strongest effects. She had slaughtered her way through several small
villages, leaving a string of tiny corpses along the way. Young girls between
fourteen and sixteen were her favorite “treat.” She was very jealous of their
youth.
Being Day of the Dead, there would be children everywhere, along
with the rest of their families. Ophelia knew that the Phaedra had lost control
and would see this as a feast. Not only was she risking the lives of innocents,
she was risking the safety and isolation of the supernatural world. A few
deaths could be covered up and dismissed. Even in this day and age where people
believed in things that go bump in the night and “bad luck,” word would spread.
A radiant glow was visible from miles away from the
cemetery. There were thousands of candles all through the headstones and
markers. You could hear the voices of men singing happy songs traveling through
the air. And, the laughter of children billowed and rolled through the hills
where she had been waiting for sun down. This was the last place the “Red
Ghost” had been seen. Her lair was easy to find. The stench was appalling. She
had at least become a little smarter this time around. She was luring the
children out to the hills where she would quite literally drain the children’s
bodies and drop their remains over the edge of a cliff.
She was overwhelmed for a moment. Originally, Ophelia had
followed this trail thinking that the guilty culprit’s were the ones who had
turned her and stole her children. The last time she had seen the bodies of
children, they had been her own. She felt rage rise with bile in her throat as
she remembered being drug by her foot away from her burning home. The men had
done their dirty work in the cellar. But, they made sure that they left them
out for display for her to see as they had their turns with her. All four
children had been violated in every twisted way that the bastards could
imagine. She would never be able to fully put the sounds of their echoing
screams out of her head. She did not know what was worse, the screaming or when
it stopped. That is when hers began.
She knew as long as she could hear them, they were alive.
But, one by she could hear the screams would turn to crying. The crying to soft
sobbing. Sobbing to whimpers. Then silence. She was in such shock that she did
not realize the men were on their way back to the house. “Men” is not the right
word. These men had ceased to be men years before. They had been turned in the
years of the Civil War where blood shed was every where and there was plenty of
blood to keep a fresh, young vampire gorged on blood. That much consumption
caused problems. It would make the vampire crazy and victim to their own
bloodlust. Their sire wanted it that way. He was a debaucherous demon. Even for
a vampire. These men would follow him to the end of the earth.
Her last memories as a human were being dragged from the
house by her foot. She could feel her ribs snapping and twisting as her face
dug into the ground. Her bones dig into her organs, puncturing them. What
little blood that was left after their feedings was seeping out of her heart
and veins. Muscles and tendons tore and pulled loose in her leg. Her foot finally
snapped loose at the bone as they reached the creek. They laughed as they
tossed her body into the ice cold water. The cold November air caused the water
to drop her body temperature even lower. They thought she was dead. They did
not realize that she was alive. But, just barely. Her will to live was gone. It
died with her children. She had been thrown a good one hundred feet from the
creek. And, as her head crashed against a large stone she felt her neck snap.
She heard the crunch as her vertebrae collided and then snapped apart as she
bounced on the creek bottom. And, she did not care. She just wanted to die.
Without her children she did not want to live. She didn’t
care anymore. Her husband was gone and now her children. It had been five years
since that night. Years had taught her that you had to go on. If you did not
have anyone left to care about, fight for the people that do. And, she was not
going to let anyone else lose a child tonight.
Upon descending the hill, she saw Phaedra in silhouette against
the glow of the candles. She was tiny. No more than five feet tall. But the way
that she stood there in the night air with her hair whipping in the wind, she
seemed enormous. It was almost as though she was floating in the air.
Flamboyance was always a specialty of hers. It wasn’t just for show. It was
just who she was.
A small child, a girl no more than four, stuck her head
around one of the outermost headstones. Her tiny feet began to take
increasingly faster steps towards Phaedra. The child was being drawn in.
Creating infatuation is a gift that few vampires have. And, the ones that do
have it as humans, too. You know them, the people that others just want to be
friends with. People give them things. Cars, jewels, groceries. The girl’s face
was lit up, laughing. I had to move quickly. I wanted to surprise her, and the
girl just blew any chance of that. There would not be any bloodshed. Not
tonight.
She felt the fire in her chest flare as she pulled Retribution
from his scabbard. It was a short sword that had been coated in silver. Using
it made her nervous. She would have to keep from touching herself with it. The
leather she was wearing would keep her from coming in contact from the metal.
Tall boots, pants, corset and shirt were very fitted and would make her stick
out like a sore thumb in her pre-Victorian world. But, it kept her safe. And,
to be honest, the outfit was enough of a distraction that people did not look
at her face. Not that many people lived to see her, anymore. The weight of the
sword was very heavy in her hand. Even after all this time, she still hadn’t
adjusted to the power in body. The sword should have been heavy for her to even
lift. But, as a vampire, it was light as a feather. Power and anger pulsed
through her muscles as she began her run at Phaedra.
A small scream escaped the mouth of the little girl. It grew
as her sweet brown eyes grew larger at the mad woman running towards her. A
sharp hiss rang is her ears as Phaedra’s head whipped around. Her eyes were red
and full of lust and hysteria. Yes, she was completely off her rocker. But, she
was ancient and old. That meant she was a formidable opponent. Her was strength
was her speed and agility. That little bit of surprise that Ophelia had was now
gone. Now, she would have to rely on her determination and use the anger that
burned within her.
She was so focused on her mission that she was oblivious
that the songs and laughter had ceased. It was deadly silent. As soon as the
vampires had laid eyes on each other, the ghosts of the children buried in the
cemetery began to gather. The candles,
toys and candies that were left by their families had enticed their spirits to
come tonight. Tonight, when the veil between this world and the next, the spirits
of the children that were there had a leader. The spirit of a fourteen year old
girl, dressed in a torn white dress whipped around her feet. She began to
gather the children with a gentle motion of her hand. The spirits followed her.
Their family members following right behind.
Ophelia ran, almost faster than a human eye could see, sword
close to her side. She gripped it tightly in fear that she might lose it. Or,
that it might be ripped from her grip by her opponents. Phaedra flew right at
her. On lookers would say that it reminded them of a head on train collision.
The movement of the two were so fast that no one was ever sure what happened in
the struggle. The sword that had been gripped like a vise had managed to be
flung from her hand. From the ground she could not see. Her advisary had
blinded her with dirt and had gripped her bony hand around Ophelia’s throat.
She could feel her muscles pulling away from the bone. This was not how she had
wanted this to go. Not at all. The cackling laughter from the woman looming
over her was added to her confusion.
She was still a young vampire herself. She was still new to
killing. It left a bitter taste in her mouth. She was ready to die. She had
been since that night five years ago. Thoughts of finally being able to die
brought her peace. Not knowing if she would go to heaven, hell or somewhere in
between, she just wanted to go. She was surprised that heaven might be an
option. But, when she heard the voice of her daughter, her daughter that had
been long dead, say, “Mother…” she quickly filled with confusion. Surely she
didn’t see her face. Her sweet blue eyes and warm smile. She was slipping in
and out of conciousness. But, she knew that she wasn’t seeing things. Her
daughter’s ghost was there. She was even growing more solid. Her bare feet
disturbing the dry dirt, causing it to billow up in clouds as she walked
towards the sword laying on the ground. With a look of determination and using
all of the focus the girl could muster, she placed her know corporeal hand
around the grip of the sword. And, with a tenacious effort, she lifted the
sword and swung it in one motion, bringing the Phaedra’s head flying from her
body.
Ophelia flew up from the ground. Her own shock and
astonishment left her body tingling, unaware of the trauma dealt by the now
dead vampire, whose body was already beginning the rapid process of decay. All
Saint’s Day was when the spirits of the dead were supposed to be able to come
back to visit their loved ones. But, she had always thought that this was just
an excuse to celebrate the lives of loved ones. Once she gained her center, she
realized that there were ghosts over other children making a circle around
them, as though they were creating a protective barrier between the vampires
and the people and the cemetery that had come to see what the ruckus was.
Ophelia and Rachel ran to each other just in time to hold each other before she
turned to mist again.
”I don’t understand. Come back my baby! Don’t leave me again!” Ophelia screamed as the child dissipated completely. She did not realize that she was sobbing and gasping for air as she grasped at the ground where her daughter had been standing. Every once of excruciating pain that she had felt over the last five years hit her all at once. She felt human for the first time in a very long while. It wasn’t until a gentle hand touched her shoulder that she realized the ghosts were all gone.
“The sun will be up soon. You can sleep in our cellar.” She
looked up to see a girl no older that her own Rachel had been sitting beside
her. “My grandmother said that anyone, vampire or not, that would the ghosts of
our children would protect is worthy of our protection as well.” Her smile was
gentle and warm. And, more importantly, genuine. Ophelia realized that she had
been there for hours, curled on the ground heaving with dry sobs. “My name is
Rose,” she spoke gently as she straightened her skirts as she got up from the
dry ground. She was not scared of her. Knowing she was a vampire, and she still
trusted her. She invited her to her house. The house where her family sleeps.
She could not turn down her generosity. But, her heartbreak was starting to
ease a bit. There was a part of her, the part that had saved her skin many
times that said this could be a trap.
But, there comes a point when you are completely
emotionally, mentally and physically drained that all you have left is faith.
Faith in the ones that offer you shelter in the storms of life. She reached her
hand up to the girl. Together, they dusted the dirt from her and her clothes
and walked quietly to the house. It was located in the center of town. Right on
the square. As the got closer to the house, she realized she could hear singing
again. But, it was quiet. Murmurs, just above a hum. People were heading back
into their homes. In her mind, she was evil. She was not worthy of love or
trust. But, these people that had never seen her before, and knew what she was
smiled at her. Warm, genuine smiles stretched across their faces. Some of them
even brought her packages wrapped in brown papers. An elderly man scooted
towards her and slowly reached out and delicately took her had in his. He
placed his lips to the back of her hand. “Gracias,” he said as he bowed low.
She didn’t understand. Of all the creatures in the world to
fear, vampires were high on the list. She was the thing of nightmares. Children
should be running and screaming. These people should be crossing themselves and
shivering. But, they were not. Instead they were welcoming her with open arms.
There was something very otherworldly going on.
Rose looked over with a small smile. She could tell that
Ophelia was confused. “My grandmother has spoke to the townspeople on your
behalf. They understand that you came to protect our children from the Blood
Witch and not to harm anyone.” Before Ophelia could respond the girl quickly
added, “She is psychic. She read your mind and could tell that you were only
here to help. Also, you are hurting and lonely. If there is anything that you
ever need, we are at your service. If you need somewhere to rest or to hide. We
will help you. You came to us in our time of need, without expecting anything
in return.”
Ophelia stopped for a moment. Warmth and love radiated from
the girls face. Any other time, she would have been furious that someone read
her mind. But, the entire town wanted to take her under their wing. She had
never in her life felt this kind of acceptance. She had spent her life not
knowing who she was. Her parents had died when she was a young girl of eight.
From then on, nothing was right again until she met Michael. Then, she lost him
and her children. There had been so many occurrences of strange and
supernatural activity around her that she was quite scared that she had been
jinxed or cursed. What harm would come to these people for protecting her?
Could she risk their lives for her own? But, she couldn’t refuse their
hospitality, either. And, the option of a safe haven was so very appealing. “I
will stay for a while. But, I insist that we find somewhere away from people so
that I am not a danger to anyone.”
“As long as you stay with us until dusk. You have to rest,”
the girl replied as she guided Ophelia into a doorway. “Welcome to our home.
2 comments:
Did you say you were wanting to write a book? I hope so :) BTW, I found a paper weight/knickknack of a sugar skull when I was home in NM and I wanted to get it for you but it was outrageously priced. I'll keep an eye out for reasonable ones when I go home next time.
Jerry and I really would like to do a graphic novel. :) And, eek!!!!
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